{"id":538,"date":"2025-05-05T18:58:52","date_gmt":"2025-05-05T17:58:52","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/gojonstonego.com\/blog\/?p=538"},"modified":"2025-05-05T18:58:53","modified_gmt":"2025-05-05T17:58:53","slug":"low-gravity-fever","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gojonstonego.com\/blog\/2025\/05\/05\/low-gravity-fever\/","title":{"rendered":"&#8220;Low-gravity Fever&#8221;"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p><em>Note: this post is a duplication from\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/shotscarecrow.substack.com\/p\/low-gravity-fever\">my substack, Stray Bulletin<\/a>.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><a href=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fbac3b21e-ee2a-4d2e-8329-4b767102cd9d_4000x3000.jpeg\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\"><img src=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/w_1456,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fbac3b21e-ee2a-4d2e-8329-4b767102cd9d_4000x3000.jpeg\" alt=\"\"\/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>In between running numerous live events over the last couple of months (which I\u2019ll post about soon) I\u2019ve been designing\/typesetting\/putting the finishing touches to the fifth in Sidekick\u2019s&nbsp;<em>10 Poets&nbsp;<\/em>series,&nbsp;<em><a href=\"https:\/\/sidekickbooks.com\/booklab\/books\/ten-poets-travel-to-the-dark-side-of-the-moon\/\">Ten Poets Travel to the Dark Side of the Moon<\/a><\/em>. As well as featuring ten brand new, specially commissioned poems, it includes an appendix, in the form of an alternative timeline of Moon landings utilising characters from European comics, and images from James Nasmyth\u2019s&nbsp;<em>The Moon: Considered as a Planet, a World, and a Satellite<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Last week we launched the book in London at one of Royal Holloway\u2019s Small Press Takeover readings at Senate House, hosted by the wonderful&nbsp;<strong>Briony Hughes<\/strong>. This week (tomorrow, that is), we\u2019re doing a&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.waterstones.com\/events\/the-dark-side-of-the-moon-an-evening-of-poetry\/cambridge\">Cambridge launch<\/a>&nbsp;at Waterstones, so as an extra little promotional push, here\u2019s a list article, wherein I will introduce you to&nbsp;<strong>three more books of space poems<\/strong>, and deliver my run-down of the&nbsp;<strong>Top 5 space-themed&nbsp;<\/strong><em><strong>Transformers<\/strong><\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><a href=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F24f1697e-5f0a-4b79-8169-e199de64a9fa_2806x1984.png\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\"><img src=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/w_1456,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F24f1697e-5f0a-4b79-8169-e199de64a9fa_2806x1984.png\" alt=\"\"\/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator\"\/>\n\n\n\n<h2>Three more books of space poems<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<h4>1.&nbsp;<em>Space Baby&nbsp;<\/em>by Suzannah Evans (Nine Arches, 2022)<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>Kicking off with an epigraph by&nbsp;<strong>Edwin Morgan<\/strong>, one of the first poets to consciously attempt sci-fi poetry,&nbsp;<em>Space Baby&nbsp;<\/em>is full of poems that fuse astronomical imagery with earthbound scenarios: above a shopper laden with bags, Betelgeuse goes supernova, \u2018lurid across the cosmos \/ like an overripe peach leaking \/ wet and gold\u2019. Factions of poets \u2014 the \u2018moon-purists\u2019 and \u2018moon-maximalists\u2019 \u2014 start seeing moons wherever they go, while in \u2018Cassini Love Poem\u2019, the loss of a NASA probe, burning up on entry into Saturn\u2019s atmosphere, becomes a metaphor for self-immolating infatuation.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Evans has a light touch; the poems are zippy and easy to follow, and there are some wonderfully lurid conceits (\u2018The Glacier Attends its Own Funeral as a Ghost\u2019, \u2018Inside Each Universe is Another Universe\u2019, \u2018The Dreaming Octopus Colour Chart\u2019) fuelled by a host of intertextual and factual reference points. Here\u2019s the second half of \u2018Supermassive Black Hole\u2019:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p>Above your head the dilating pupil of sky<br>will show you how everything turns out \u2014<br>the pinkblue future of undiscovered galaxies<br>possibilities forking like lighting. The air<br>is treacly with gravity and you fold yourself<br>inside it \u2014 you chose this \u2014<br>the rest of time will go on happening.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h4>2.&nbsp;<em>A Responsibility to Awe&nbsp;<\/em>by Rebecca Elson (edited by Anne Berkeley, Angelo di Cintio and Bernard O\u2019Donoghue) (Carcanet, 2001)<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>Elson was a scientist first and foremost \u2014 she worked at the Institute of Astronomy in Cambridge in the 1990s, researching globular clusters, chemical evolution and galaxy formation.&nbsp;<em>A Responsibility to Awe<\/em>&nbsp;was published posthumously, after her early death, and is made up of material gathered by her husband and close friend, including extracts from notebooks.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Science and poetry aren\u2019t entirely incompatible, and some exciting projects have arisen from attempts to bring them together (see&nbsp;<strong><a href=\"https:\/\/sidekickbooks.com\/booklab\/books\/laboratorio\/\">Simon Barraclough<\/a><\/strong><a href=\"https:\/\/sidekickbooks.com\/booklab\/books\/laboratorio\/\">\u2019s&nbsp;<\/a><em><a href=\"https:\/\/sidekickbooks.com\/booklab\/books\/laboratorio\/\">Laboratorio<\/a>&nbsp;<\/em>and&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/projectabeona.wordpress.com\/\">Project Abeona<\/a>, run by&nbsp;<strong>Andy Jackson<\/strong>, one of the poets featured in \u2026&nbsp;<em>Dark Side of the Moon<\/em>). But there is something of a tension, since scientific writing aspires toward precision, literalness, practical conclusions, while poetry attempts to leave room, lean into the figurative, pose ever wider questions.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Elson\u2019s grappling with this tension resulted in a singular voice \u2014 spare, for the most part, with quick turns, and a focus that rarely drifts from its chosen subject matter, instead pinning it in place. In the punchy \u2018What if There Were No Moon&#8217;?\u2019, she lists: \u201cNo bright nights \/ Occultations of the stars \/ No face \/ No moon songs\u201d. There\u2019s more than space poems here \u2014 moths, nuns and salmon are equally keenly observed, while eels and kites are deployed as metaphor \u2014 and like Evans, Elson worked hard to connect concepts from her astronomy research to everyday phenomena:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p>\u2018Dark Matter\u2019<\/p><p>Above a pond<br>An unseen filament<br>Of spider\u2019s floss<br>Suspends a slowly<br>Spinning leaf<\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h4>3.&nbsp;<em>Watcher of the Skies<\/em>, edited by Rachel Piercy and Emma Wright (The Emma Press, 2016)<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>A children\u2019s anthology, made eminently more readable both by&nbsp;<strong>Emma Wright<\/strong>\u2019s simple, scratchy line illustrations and the plethora of accompanying notes supplied by University of Edinburgh\u2019s&nbsp;<strong>Rachel Cochrane<\/strong>. Many of the poems are by adult-audience poets trying their hand at children\u2019s writing, and while this can result in some clumsiness at times, it\u2019s also freed the poets up to be sassier and more direct.&nbsp;<strong>Cheryl Moskowitz<\/strong>\u2019s \u2018The Algonquin Calendar of Changing Moons\u2019 is mostly a gorgeous list poem (\u201cWolf Moon \/ Snow Moon \/ Worm Moon \u2026 Pink Moon \/ Flower Moon \/ Strawberry Moon\u201d) while&nbsp;<strong>Inua Ellams<\/strong>&nbsp;delivers a lesson in basic astrophysics both teasingly and succinctly: \u201cEverything we are is everything they were. \/ Everything they were is everything we are.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I contributed to a short sequence of pastiches called \u2018Poets in Space!\u2019 which is also included in this book. Here\u2019s my take on \u2018The Thought Fox\u2019:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p>\u2018Ted Hughes in Space\u2019<br><em>Guest-starring Fox McCloud AKA Star Fox<\/em><\/p><p>I imagine this midnight moment\u2019s starfield:<br>Something else is blasting<br>Through the vacuum\u2019s loneliness<br>Past the moonbase where my instruments tick.<\/p><p>Through my telescope I see no comet:<br>Something more near<br>With a flamier tail<br>Is entering the lunasphere.<br><br>Hot, hurtlingly as an asteroid,<br>A combat spaceship rips through dark;<br>Fine paws serve a moment, that now<br>And again now, and now, and now<\/p><p>Slips the ship between debris<br>And satellites, and neon laser fire<br>Lights up the sky and the cockpit<br>Where the pilot boldly plots his course<\/p><p>Through systems, his eye<br>A narrowing deepening greenness,<br>Brilliantly, pluckily<br>Striking at an evil empire<\/p><p>Till, with a sudden sharp shot, Star Fox<br>Is gone again into a hole in space.<br>The telescope is empty still. The instruments<br>Have gone crazy.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><a href=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F423c7b97-99b2-42f2-a1ef-5a9a65fcebfe_4000x2609.jpeg\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\"><img src=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/w_1456,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F423c7b97-99b2-42f2-a1ef-5a9a65fcebfe_4000x2609.jpeg\" alt=\"\"\/><\/a><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator\"\/>\n\n\n\n<h2>Top 5 space-themed Transformers<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<h4>5. Moonrock<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>Moonrock is a member of the Astro Squad, a \u2018Micromaster Combiner Squad\u2019, meaning his original 1990 toy was only a couple of inches tall in robot mode and transformed into the front half of a lunar missile transport vehicle. He\u2019s made no appearances in any&nbsp;<em>Transformers<\/em>&nbsp;narrative media, so we only have a couple of back-of-the-box profiles to work off, but he sounds like something of a daydreamer and introspective philosopher, inclined to gaze at the stars all night long in wonder, or endlessly speculate on the nature of the universe.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/gojonstonego.com\/mechamorphoses\/moonrock.php\">Here\u2019s a poem about Moonrock by&nbsp;<\/a><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/gojonstonego.com\/mechamorphoses\/moonrock.php\">Harry Man<\/a><\/strong>, part of my online&nbsp;<em>Mechamorphoses<\/em>&nbsp;project.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>4. Cosmos<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>Cosmos, who transforms into a bright green Adamski flying saucer, sounds like cyborg Peter Lorre in the original&nbsp;<em>Transformers&nbsp;<\/em>cartoon. This was a deliberate choice on the part of his voice actor, Michael McConnohie, for reasons never elaborated upon. Because of his novel alt-mode, Cosmos is also a rather squat little robot with gorilla forearms and what appears to be a severe underbite \u2014 and since his job is orbital reconnaissance he spends most of his time on his lonesome, making him a rather eccentric character in the round.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/gojonstonego.com\/mechamorphoses\/cosmos.php\">Here\u2019s a poem about Cosmos by&nbsp;<\/a><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/gojonstonego.com\/mechamorphoses\/cosmos.php\">Claire Tr\u00e9vien<\/a><\/strong>&nbsp;\u2014 another from the&nbsp;<em>Mechamorphoses<\/em>&nbsp;project.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>3. Astrotrain<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>As the first major character to transform into a space shuttle, Astrotrain gets heavy rotation in&nbsp;<em>Transformers<\/em>&nbsp;media as a means of interplanetary transport. Yes \u2014 the other Transformers ride around&nbsp;<em>inside<\/em>&nbsp;him, despite him usually standing the same height as them in robot mode. Unfortunately, his original character profile failed to give him a distinctive personality, which means he\u2019s taken on all sorts of odd roles within the various fictional continuities: a dim-witted petty schemer who tries to take over the world with an army of locomotives; an abused underling who turns against his master; a vengeful widower (?!?); and a non-sentient \u2018devil train outa Perdition\u2019.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>His second alt-mode, as his name suggests, is a train, which means that if&nbsp;<em>Transformers&nbsp;<\/em>fiction<em>&nbsp;<\/em>aimed a few notches higher on the realism scale, he would face the choice of changing into a land vehicle which can only move in a straight line, or a flying vehicle which can\u2019t leave the ground without the help of a solid rocket booster.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=JbjvodCCChs\">Astrotrain once visited the Moon, where he got into a fight with Omega Supreme, the Autobot titan<\/a>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>2. Countdown<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>Countdown is another Micromaster, and has only very briefly featured in the stories. His character concept is outrageously good though; he\u2019s a Cybertronian space explorer, landing on alien worlds long before the other&nbsp;<em>Transformers&nbsp;<\/em>characters and intervening in their politics, Flash Gordon style. As a result, the diminutive size of his 1989 toy and his minimal impact on&nbsp;<em>Transformers&nbsp;<\/em>lore stands in stark contrast to his standing on thousands of distant planets, where there are presumably statues of him and public holidays held in his honour.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The reason he\u2019s so high up this list, however, is because he\u2019s the only character in the franchise, to my knowledge, who transforms into a moon buggy.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Apparently his toy was a Woolworths exclusive in the UK.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>1. Sky Lynx<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>Sky Lynx is ludicrous. He\u2019s a space shuttle and NASA&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Crawler-transporter#\/media\/File:Crawler-Transporter.jpg\">crawler-transporter<\/a>&nbsp;that traverse space together and transform into a pair of creatures who share one conscience. The shuttle becomes something like a giant archaeopteryx, the transporter a blue puma with sleek golden head. These two forms can also join back together as a six-limbed monstrosity (a griffin?) that walks and flies, negating the need for the shuttle mode entirely.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Personality-wise, he\u2019s constantly telling everyone how great he is, and providing commentary on his own escapades: \u201cEverybody out! Another perfect flight completed by yours truly, Sky Lynx. Flawless, right down to the landing.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/gojonstonego.com\/mechamorphoses\/skylynx.php\">Here\u2019s a poem about Sky Lynx by my Sidekick co-editor,&nbsp;<\/a><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/gojonstonego.com\/mechamorphoses\/skylynx.php\">Kirsten Irving<\/a><\/strong>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><a href=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fdae8ad32-c485-48c2-9562-82994a100d58_2877x1577.png\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\"><img src=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/w_1456,c_limit,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fdae8ad32-c485-48c2-9562-82994a100d58_2877x1577.png\" alt=\"\"\/><\/a><figcaption>Source of all toys images: tfwiki.net<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Note: this post is a duplication from\u00a0my substack, Stray Bulletin. In between running numerous live events over the last couple of months (which I\u2019ll post about soon) I\u2019ve been designing\/typesetting\/putting the finishing touches to the fifth in Sidekick\u2019s&nbsp;10 Poets&nbsp;series,&nbsp;Ten Poets Travel to the Dark Side of the Moon. 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